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April 21, 2012
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Canon
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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
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1/2000 second
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Apr 19, 2012, 1:57:17 PM
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Gymnasist by Emmatyan Gymnasist by Emmatyan
A young school girl escapes her art lessons to walk in a spring alley. She is also secretely in love with her teacher. That's the story! I hope yop enjoy the photos!
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This is a photo of a young woman in what could be a park on either a spring or fall day. She appears to be enjoying the weather, or inspired by it and is going to be doing some painting at the location.
It seems to be trying to convey a very dreamy and serene setting, like the girl is completely detached from her surroundings or what is going on around her. I further get the feeling of this with her skin and her clothing being very de-saturated in the photo, surrounded by the brilliant green of the grass, the deep reddish brown of the tree trunk behind her, and the pop of yellow in the leaves of the branches in the back ground. She appears to be dreaming about something she wants to put into a painting, maybe it’s the love that is described in the description of the photo.
I think the photo is very well done, the colors are beautiful, depth of field is great and the focus is very sharp. I don’t like the way her legs are cut off, leading to an amputee look. I believe it would have been better if her legs were folded behind her still within the framing so you could see them in full. Other than that I don’t see anything wrong with the photo. She does have that dreamy look in her expression, but looking at this photo I don’t see or interpret the message the photographer states they are trying to get across in the description they provided.
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Catandhearts Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful!
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KasperGustavsson Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Photographer
One of the most beautiful portraits I've ever seen. So lovely model. Love the tones, pose. Nice work! Her hair is just amazing.
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